THE NOTEBOOK
The notebook is one of my favorite films.
I was really deeply moved by this story because I love the drama and romance
films.
Maybe this film is the common and
romantic story of a poor and passionate young man falls in love with rich young
woman, but it is lovely for the music used and the mean characters, Ryan Gosling
and Rachel McAdams.
The film starts in a nursing home with
the resident Duke. He is reading a story to an old woman who is suffering from
loss of memory. His story he reads is about two young lovers named Allie Hamilton
and Noah Calhoun who met at a carnival and they soon fell in love with each
other.
Ally was fifteen years old. She was a
rich girl and Noah was seventeen years old. He was a poor boy. They spent all
the summer together.
One day, Noah brought Allie to an
ancient house, in which he dreamt of buying and restoring, so they started to make
love when suddenly Allie´s parents arrived and they took Allie because they did
not approve their romance for their different social classes. After that, she
was forced to move and go to the university although she was willing to give it
up for Noah.
For a year, he wrote 365 letters to her
but she never got them because her mother, Anne did not deliver them to her.
Three years later, the United States joined
the World War II and Noah and his best friend Fin enlisted in the army. After
the war, Noah came back to his town and he restored the antique house and many
people wanted to buy it. When Allie accidentally saw the photo of Noah and his
house in a newspaper, she felt divided between her first love and her
commitment with Lon. Meanwhile Duke stops reading to the old lady since his
children are visiting him in the nursing home.

oh! it is a very romantic movie! I think it's so lovely but I think you mean
ResponderEliminar° the main characters...
° the story he reads...
Ari i don´t understand the first point jeje
EliminarHi Xime!
ResponderEliminarAlthough I have not watched this film , I loved its plot. well mm I think that your writting you can use the present and past perfect in some sentences , for example you wrote ;
in which he dreamt of buying and restoring , It also could be ; in which he had dreamt buy and restore.
she was forced to move , It also could be : she has forced to move.
Right you also can use some synonymous for example : drama is the same that plot .
In your fourth paragraph you wrote : he wrote 365 letters to her , I think that another right way could be : he wrote 365 letters her.
Gema in the first sentence i think it is correct because is something that happened and finished. The verb is together "dream of".
Eliminari wrote is pass tense so in the second suggestion you give me is in present perfect and may be the text wouldn´t have relation.
with the synonymous it isn´t a problem i think is correct!